Showing posts with label Writing.. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Writing.. Show all posts

Friday, June 7, 2013

Octopus on the go!

Stop the video at 40 seconds and read the ending that I made up. Then you can watch the end of the video.


As ollie the octopus slithered along the edge of the truck he could feel his tentacles slipping of the side but he was determined to save his love.Ollie peeped into the van the driver was listening to music and took no notice of Ollie. Then Ollie slipped and landed on the window. The van driver started to wind up his window and that was when he noticed Ollie. He screamed and hit Ollie away,he landed on another van and the van driver threw him back at the van where he had started. It was like a game of octopus table tennis. This was extremely painful for Ollie but he would do anything for his lovely wife.

Then he landed with a splat on the chilly bin that his wife was in.
He looked at the evil driver and he launched himself onto the steering wheel he reached out and started slapping the driver. He lifted him up but Ollie slid out of his hands and landed on his head and was trying to rip his hair out. The driver took both hands off the steering wheel and was trying to pull Ollie off but Ollie was too strong. The drivers van went crashing through markets but the driver managed to get his foot on the brake and the van skidded to a halt right outside of a seafood shop. He ripped Ollie of his head with a bit of his hair coming of as well, then he threw him in the chilly bin.

The driver gave Ollie and his wife Juliet into the chef. The chef opened up the box and looked at the octopi. “Oh man come on they never deliver them dead this company sucks,” he said with a big sigh. He just looked at them “I can’t kill these two they are just too cute,”. Ollie and Juliet were looking at the chef with puppy dog faces. I know what I can do he thought to himself. “How about you two come home with me I have a octopus in my tank the tank is huge it could fit you and three others, oh and by the way my name is Nick your new owner,”. He picked them up and put them back into the chilly bin. A few minutes later they were on the move again but this time it was a peaceful move. When they got let out of the chilly bin into the tank they met an octopus called Tommy. Tommy was a very nice octopus and they all liked each other very much. Everyday Nick feed them and went off to his work. Nick, Tommy, Juliet and Ollie lived a great life together. Well that was until they found out that the tank we were in was a fridge and that in glade rap was a knife. Written on the glad rape was knife for chopping Octopi. Oh no I thought to myself in horror here we go again!

Wednesday, March 6, 2013

Night time Mayehm

“Go to sleep Josh,” says my mum she doesn't sound very happy at all. When she leaves the room I hop out of bed and grab a guinness world record book. “Ahhhh this is the life relaxing when you're meant to be asleep,”. After reading for about an Hour I hear my mum coming towards my room. I quickly sprint to put my book away run back and jump into bed. As I close my eyes and curl up. Mum must be checking if I’m asleep. I hope I can trick her. Creeeek I hear my door close yay I did it she fell for it. I turn the radio on really quiet and lie back down. Then my favourite song comes on I try to stop myself from signing. “Why does your song have to be so catchy Ollie murs,” I say to myself. I just turn of the radio now my night is going to be boring. Then I start to sing “Troublemaker,”  “no stop singing,” I say very angrily. I hear footsteps coming up the hallway oh no I think to myself. I close my eyes and curl up. But I hear the person say “United Manchester united,”.Then I realise that Manchester united have just won a game of soccer and that the person is not mum it is daniel what a relief. “Hey Daniel” I say “hey shrimp,” he replies. We have a great conversation about soccer. Daniels voice starts to disappear what.Then I realise Daniel has fallen asleep. He must of been very tired. Wait that means I have to go to sleep or I could sit here and be bored I know what I will do I think to myself. As I crept out of my room and walk down the hallway. Carefully I walk into the kitchen and got a nice cold drink of water. As I make my way back to my room  I see my mum walk out of her room I take a giant leap and go crashing into the bathroom. Peeping through the door I see my mum walk straight past me. Being as stealth as I possibly could I crawl back into my room. I throw myself onto my bed and start to doze off what a night this has been.  

Wednesday, December 12, 2012

Letter To Myself in 20 years.

Dear Josh
This letter is from yourself at the age of ten. This is what I wanted my life to be like at the age of ten. I hope you are a professional football player with the latest nike mold boots and the latest adidas sprig boots. I wish that you will meet ossie adillias,Gareth Bale and the best young talent Harry kane. Josh I hope you will play for tottenham hotspur and if you have good for you! It would be great if you would help everyone in need that you possibly can. Do people still call you Littleping? Are you a chef? I hope you are I want to be a dessert chef or play for the black sox or Tottenham,and the all whites. That would be awesome. My best friend is Brody is he still my best friend? I hope that you will live in London  Right next to white hart lane.This would be an awesome life. Do you live live in a mansion with a big pool and another spa pool with bubbles. Do you have a big back yard. I hope you did breed different types of animals together and the first animal I you breed was crossed between a snail and a polar bear and I you called it Littleping. Do you have a Lamborghini or a ferrari. This Is me and my best friend Brody. Do we still look the same?
I hope you have visited Parris Rio Moscow Perth Gold coast Shanghai and all of Japan.

Yours sincerely Josh Little 12th of the 12th 2012

Tuesday, November 20, 2012

Ticket Booth

As I stare at the booth I see people turning invisible and others just walk away. I can’t decide would it be cool being invisible I really don’t know. I decide that I will just flip a coin on it. Heads I get the ticket tails I don’t. I flip the coin as I see it spin what will it land on what will happen. The coin hits the ground, I look straight at it it landed on...Heads!. What am i in for. I buy the ticket. “Excuse me sir can you see me?,” I say “Um no, no I can’t,” he replied. I wonder if this will be any good at all. As I walk through town I walk into Rebel sports and ask the man serving me “are these the boots with the control grip,”. But all I see is a man run and scream “ahhhhhhhhhhh who said that i’m leaving this place,”. I just don’t think being invisible is going to be very fun at all I think to myself. I walk home and sit down on the couch. I click my fingers for my cat to come to me. I also call his name. He looks very worried and scared I see him run off. IS he scared as well being invisible is dumb. I quickly run back to the ticket booth.”Do you have any tickets to turn me back to normal,” I say to the man at the ticket booth. He replies by saying “no sorry mate,”. It looks like I will be stuck like this forever I think to myself. I wish that coin had landed on tails. I walk back to myself thinking about that dumb coin not landing on tails. Man this is going to be very tough being invisible.



This is writing we had to do about if we would be invisible or if we wouldn't.
To check out Sarahs writing.Click this. To check out the writing on Matt H's blog Click here

Friday, November 16, 2012

Bike Reflection

Bike safety has started and we have been doing it for nearly two weeks. I have got a lot better at signalling. I need to work on looking behind me. I really enjoy bike safety. I wish it would never stop. I hope the teachers think I can go on the road. I think I am pretty safe.

Thursday, November 15, 2012

Hit for a six

                Hit for a six

We’re about to start the game. It is the world cup final. New Zealand had smashed Pakistan in the semi final. Also Australia had beat england by four runs.  The players run onto the field. New Zealand against Australia.
I am the first ball for the game. I see Michael Clarke and Shane Watson on the back of their shirts. They step into their crease.
Daniel Vic Tore is the first bowler. He is one of the most talkative in the team I am always training with him. He picks me up with a strong grip almost as strong as the worlds strongest man. Runs up to the crease and bowls me,ouch I bounce on the ground. “Hit me with your best shot,” I scream. Whack Clarke hits me. “Fire away,” I say painfully. “I believe I can fly ,” then Bam I hit the billboards. ‘Michael Jackson ow”.

I look at the big screen there I am on tv I think its a tv anyway. I wish my mum was here so I could scream look mum i’m on tv. I am back on the pitch. I get bowled once again out I hit the wickets. Man that actually really hurt I think the players don’t like me they are picking on me.

NZ is batting now up first is Ross Taylor and Daniel Vettori. I get bowled up up up and away that was a good hit from Ross Taylor. I keep going then whack I think I just broke someones finger. I see the man run off in pain. “Oops,” I say.
Now it is even. The last bowl of the game I get bowled Brendon Mccullum smashes it NZ need a six to win. I’m going going gone for a six NZ win hooray. I see the NZ players running around screaming. Daniel lifts the cup yay. I am trying to celebrate with the players because I am from NZ. This has been a good day other than the pain. I’m going to have a lot of bruises in the morning.

The end.  

Wednesday, October 31, 2012

Wonder Chapter 3 The Tour.

                                                                                                                                       Wonder
                                                Chapter 3   The tour
“I think it might be time for us to go on the tour,” says Charlotte. As I walk out of Mr Tushman's office I look at August.He is staring at his mum. I don’t know what is going through his mind. Doesnt he like Mr Tushman? Don’t know and I don’t want to ask.
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We first go up to our home room. He just stands there looking at the ground. "So this is the home room that we all will be in. Our teacher will be Miss Butox ," Jack says with a confident voice. "Ok its alright it’s pretty small but thats alright," replies August.

As we move on to the music room August has been talking a lot to Jack. Jack seems to agree, so they must be talking about something Jack likes or he's just being kind. We walk into the music room Augusts eyes light up. He runs up to the drums and starts to play them its like he’s pro. He goes wild he is flipping his hair around I see his face. I know why he is not looking at us. He stands up and starts to run around oh no, he must be one of the kids who love rock music. I couldn't put up with it "Shut up'' I yell. "Oops sorry i was just annoyed how about we move on," I say trying to make it as if nothing happened.
 
As we walk out I think to myself why did I say that I am so so dumb. We move on to the cafeteria Jack is still talking to the monster I mean the kid. There is just tables and chairs around. Then August says "Sweet free food," I didn't want to tell him the food was disgusting and you have to pay for some things. I don't want to say the wrong thing again.

When we left the Cafeteria I see the science room "We will go to the science room next," I say. So we walk off to the science lab. When we get there August runs off straight to the chemicals,he starts talking about science and using lots of words that I don't know the meaning to. He is crazy about science so he is a rock loving kid as well as a science loving kid ok I am starting to get to know the ugly thing, I mean the not so ugly thing. He doesn't ask anything about the chooks. I thought he would.

We decide to show him the gym. When we get into the gym Jack Charlotte and I run onto the gym equipment. August stays back he must not like P.E. we should leave then. So we decide to go back to Mr Tushman’s office. When we get back to Mr Tushman’s office he says “How was the tour?” “ Average I love rock music,” replied August. Oh no he is not going to fit in here.

Thursday, October 18, 2012

100 Word Writing

Suddenly the temperature dropped. I was outside in Antarctica just outside of the Scott Base. I had lost a dear and I had to stay outside for five minutes in just a shirt and shorts and it was minus thirty degrees. As I look at my watch i see it has only been two minutes still three minutes to go . I keep looking at my watch hooray only one more minute. The people in Antarctica call it warm at minus seventeen degree brrr. I look at my watch again finally it has been five minutes.What 50 minutes not five.

Thursday, August 2, 2012

A lonely robot

                                                 A lonely robot
As the gates creek open I think to myself should I go inside?. It looks dull and creepy i'm a little bit scared. I think long and hard. Ok im going in as I move forward slowly into the building the gates close behind me. Then the gates lock their self. It is pitch black I can't see a thing. A ray of light shines around the room. “I can see again,” I say excitedly. Three doors are right in front of me. I don't know what one to open. I open the middle one and I see lots of machines working away. So I decide to go inside the door on the left. Inside the door in the left and I see a scientist. He just stares at me then he chases me around. I run as fast as I can I sprint out the door slamming it behind me. So I go into the third and final door. I see some shiny new upgraded robots. “Hi are you robots to?,” I ask. “Yes me and Clank are robots with feelings,”. “I am clang and this is clank,” said clang. “Hi i'm rusty,”. “Rusty how about we take you for a upgrade,”. So the two robots take me to the upgrade room. They put me into this big glass case. Then they told me to close my eyes and I will be upgraded. Guess what they were right. When they showed me what I looked like. I was shiny and hansom. “How about from now on we call you slick,” said clank. So from now on I was called slick. Then someone who looked very familiar came into the room. Then they gave me a big sloppy kiss. Then I realized that it was my mum. In the small factory with crazy scientist me,clang.Clank and Clang built a shiny new house for our families shiny look.  In the small factory with crazy scientist me,clang,clank and my mum lived happily ever after.
The end.
    

Tuesday, July 31, 2012

Shark attack

Norman was just about to gobble Miss Scorpio up. A beach ball landed smack right on Normans fin and followed through which pushed Norman under the water. That means Miss Scorpio got time to get away. “Why does everything bad have to happen to me,” Norman muttered to himself. So Norman thought about who was going to be his next victim. Maybe Mr O'leary Norman thought to himself yes him he will scream like a little girl. When Norman was just about to get Mr O'leary from behind. When silly old Miss Scorpio yelled out to him. Mr o'leary jumped on top of Normans neck and it felt like he was strangling me. So I shook him off and headed off. “Who should I try and eat i'm getting hungry,”. Then Norman saw Mr Nile. Mr Nile hes such a scaredy cat. Norman swam as fast as he could but when he got closer to Mr Nile he rammed straight into him. But then he found out that it wasn't Mr Nile it was the toughest guy around. After a few minutes of punches to the face Norman just left him alone. Norman was thinking if he should give up being a shark or should he keep scaring people. After a long and hard period of thinking Norman chose to keep scaring people. He scared people until a real man eating great white ate him. Lots of people in the town didn't know what to do should they celebrate. He did try to eat everyone in town. But it was sad that he did die. So all of the people did pay respect to Norman.
It was very sad about Norman's death. In the small town of tenvill there were no more Human sharks.
The end.           

Thursday, June 21, 2012

Perswading

WALT per
Have you ever stayed up late and had a good night have you been to a party and stayed up late you probably have. Was it a good night yes it probably was so you should let your children stay up late to. Let them have a good night. They can enjoy it with you what a good night you would have just think of it.






Children should choose their bed time because they are sensible enough to choose it. We will always go to bed at a reasonable time not some silly time like midnight. We will calm down and not run around and be gobbers. Trust them they won't run around just trust them.




We need the experience for when we are teenagers so we will be able to handle staying up late. We need to learn that you can’t stay up late and run around. Because we will be really responsible when we are older.



I think you hate getting up early and telling your children to turn the tv down. Or maybe telling them to turn off the radio. They can get so annoying do you hate it.





Do you want to get ride of your children how craul. Do you want to eat lollies and chocolates think about it you do. If you don't do that what is your reason for not letting your kids stay up late.


Parents need to be nicer to their children  when it comes to bedtimes. All the kids will probably agree. Do you think all the kids would  agree I do.  So you should be nice to them.
  
There's one solution to stop the things above that is let your children choose their own bedtime!!

By Josh Little

The war of the cockroaches

The war of the cockroaches
One fine day there was a bunch of bright colorful cockroaches and a bunch of
dull
evil cockroaches. They had always hated each other and on the 30th of july 2002
they had a cockroach war. In the forest they were both tramping in the forest when
the evil leader Temper told his troops attack. They attacked the good colourful cockroaches the war had begun. The evil team were shooting the goodies withf mud balls. The goodies returned with cockroach poo. The war was firing up the slow trampers arrived and started to fire poo. Then the evil slow ones fell asleep well that wasn't good for the evils don don don dooooon. During the fight the volcano up the track erupted all of the cockroaches tramped down the track quickly the evils left behind the sleeping ones behind to die. When the goodies were three quarters down
the forest they saw body parts from the evils sleeping beauties.  Pallet said ‘poor
them us goodies would never ever ever leave a man behind’. ‘That  is exactly why
we are going to get the people still alive said Pallet strongly. ‘What’ said the troops. The goodies went tramping up to the volcano. they all looked very scared except for Pallet. When they got to the top Pallet lifted four cockroaches two on each shoulder Pallet is the strongest of all. All of the troops ran down the hill as fast as they could. Then Pallet tripped over and everyone didn't notice and kept running down the hill. Pallet had to save himself and the four evils. Him and the other four tried to stand
up but they were all caught up in vines. Pallet pulled some mints out of his pocket. Then he pulled out some chewing gum. ‘I've got five packets of mints that have
twenty in a packet and fifteen pieces of chewing gum’ he said to himself. I can use
all of my mints and stick them together with the gum. So Pallet did that and he
stuck some of the gum to his hand and threw the food ball. The ball stuck to a tree 
and Pallet held onto the other four and they all flung out of the vines. ‘Why thank
you Pallet you just saved my life. ‘Well thats why I signed up for this job to fight
for happiness and to save lives. ‘You are as strong as a lion and as fast as usan bolt don't forget your smarter then a scientist’ the sleeping beauties explained. ‘Can we please join the goodies because Temper is always yelling at us’ . ‘Sure only if you never ever hurt or attack a goodie’ said Pallet ‘Deal’ The new goodies replied. 
When the five got down to the bottom of the hill Pallet said ‘ These four are joining
the goodies’ ‘Hooray’ the troops screamed. ‘Their names are Smacker Wacker Cracker and Dacker’. ‘Welcome’ said the troops. All of the goodies lived very
happily. As for the evils they all went to the cockroach prison where they got
horrible food and nothing good ever happened to them.
The end

Monday, May 21, 2012

Journey of a rain drop

As me and my friends gather together in a big gray cloud ready to fall. I close my eyes and then next thing you were all falling down. Looking around me I can see the world I can see the trees. A helicopters propellers nearly got me what a close one. The ground is coming closer to me I am nearly there.Splat! I hit the front window of a car ouch that hurt. Ahhhhhh the window wiper had sent me flying straight into a drain. Sliding through the drain out of a tap into a bottle. A child picks the bottle up and goes into the car. His mum drives him to his soccer game. Before the game he drinks some water but not me. The game has began about fifteen minutes into the game the boy gets subbed. He drinks more water but not me. Another kid gets subbed off for the little boy. at half time the boy drinks some water and stops just before me. Full time the ref calls the boy runs off to get a drink oh no. When the boy gets to his drink bottle he picks it up and he drinks all of the water that was left. That means he drunk me.
                                               The end.

Friday, April 27, 2012

Camp writing

This is one of the rafting groups having some fun.

Rain doesn't stop primary school students.

Room 19 and Room 18 from parkvale school have just arrived back from a very wet camp. The reason for the camp was to face our fears and tackle new challenges. During their camp they were lucky enough to go rafting in the mohaka river threw some rapids. They needed guides of course. The guides were called Mike Deon Liam and Bones. The kids got pushed in the river mainly by their guides.  


They also got to do some air pistol shooting. They were not allowed to wave their guns around. Some of the kids have good accuracy.


The kids did some archery as well some did archery inside because it was to wet to do it outside. archery must of been pretty fun.










The photo above is one of the rafting groups doing a major wheely.



Some of the kids slept in bivouacs they must be tough kids.
The car trips were even fun.All the kids enjoyed their camp a lot! The teachers and parents enjoyed the camp to.
 








Monday, March 12, 2012

Education
Classes will work on ilisten 12 extreme which are a little box that will be able to write on  text on and listen to music on.
Classes will evolve some classes work on computers in the year 2012 but in the year 2100 they will all work on ilisten 12 extreme because technoligy is getting used more.


School kids will read books that will automatically turn pages when you say turn because it will help them multitask plus reading will be the only subject. This will happen because kids are starting to not like writing and maths and teachers will fell sorry for them.
                                  


Technology
There will be an automatic rocking chair.
All you will have to do is press a blue button on the side if the rocking chair. Then you say what speed you want to rock at it wont stop until you say stop because people will be to lazy do do most things by there self.



Transport



I think that people will be able to teleport by having a wath and then they say where they want to teleport to and they will go there. This will happecn because people are and  getting  lazier and lazier.





Nature  


Trees will be small because paper will start to run out so people will cut down trees to get paper.


Friday, March 2, 2012

My time to shine

To day it was my time to shine. That is because in assembly I got the opportunity to read one of my storys in front of the whole school. Before I started reading I felt nervous but when I was reading my story I started to fell a bit more confident. But overall I felt proud of myself.

Thursday, February 16, 2012

My cat


As Sam peeked over the fence Tom threw a snow ball at Sam.He fell deep into the snow. When he got back up  Tom was sitting on the fence once again.Sam jumped when he was in mid air he swung his paw at Tom but he missed and fell back down. Tom was laughing at him that made Sam angry.He pounced at Tom and hit the fence instead. That made Tom laugh even more. Then Sam jumped onto the fence next to Tom and swiped him of the Tom fell into the snow. Now Sam was the one laughing. Sam was to busy laughing he didn't notice that Tom was making lots of snow balls and he had even mad a sling shot with a stick and some flax from a plant . SPLAT!a gigantic snow ball as big as gym ball hit Sam. How can I get tom back Sam thought to himself. His thinking was interrupted by another snow ball “ha ha” tom laughed he was laughing so hard he nearly cried. ‘Sob you win’ Sam said sadly so Tom started to fly away and then Sam hit Tom with a snow ball Tom fell and his beck hit the fence it was as red as Rudolph's nose. Then Tom flew onto the roof of Simon's house and kicked a hole lot of snow on
Sam's head ‘sucker’ Tom said. Well Sam was under the pile of snow he was building snow balls
he next thing you know Tom was covered in snow. When he popped back up his wing was broken and Sam felt sorry  so Sam ran in side and got a bandage. He took Tom inside and they both apologised they both felt sorry and they shook hands and promised not to do it again.

(I wonder how long that will last).