Tuesday, July 31, 2012

Shark attack

Norman was just about to gobble Miss Scorpio up. A beach ball landed smack right on Normans fin and followed through which pushed Norman under the water. That means Miss Scorpio got time to get away. “Why does everything bad have to happen to me,” Norman muttered to himself. So Norman thought about who was going to be his next victim. Maybe Mr O'leary Norman thought to himself yes him he will scream like a little girl. When Norman was just about to get Mr O'leary from behind. When silly old Miss Scorpio yelled out to him. Mr o'leary jumped on top of Normans neck and it felt like he was strangling me. So I shook him off and headed off. “Who should I try and eat i'm getting hungry,”. Then Norman saw Mr Nile. Mr Nile hes such a scaredy cat. Norman swam as fast as he could but when he got closer to Mr Nile he rammed straight into him. But then he found out that it wasn't Mr Nile it was the toughest guy around. After a few minutes of punches to the face Norman just left him alone. Norman was thinking if he should give up being a shark or should he keep scaring people. After a long and hard period of thinking Norman chose to keep scaring people. He scared people until a real man eating great white ate him. Lots of people in the town didn't know what to do should they celebrate. He did try to eat everyone in town. But it was sad that he did die. So all of the people did pay respect to Norman.
It was very sad about Norman's death. In the small town of tenvill there were no more Human sharks.
The end.           

1 comment:

  1. Wow Josh. This is a really cool piece if writing. I really liked reading your story and I also loved reading the book. It is sad that she past away. Well done:)

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